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Tuesday, 26 May 2015

Marshmallow


Marshmallows
One night there was a boy named Jake camping in the woods. He was roasting his marshmallows over the fire when he he heard something behind him. When he turned around he saw a crocodile. He was very quiet so the small boy gave the crocodile a marshmallow. He only had three marshmallows left. As the boy gave him the last marshmallow he snatched it from his hand.  When he ran out of marshmallows the crocodile got really mad. He started  chasing  the small boy around camp site. Then the boy had an idea. He found his pillow that looked like a marshmallow and gave it to the crocodile. The crocodile was so happy. Then the boy ran away screaming, help!!!!!!!
When the crocodile went to roast his marshmallow it popped. He got really sad. He  sat and looked  at  the  moon. They both lived happily ever after.
by  TeAranui and Mathew

2 comments:

  1. Hi Te Aranui and Mathew
    I really liked the narrative you wrote about Jake camping out and having yummy marshmallows. What a scary story!, but Jake was very clever to give his pillow to the crocodile.

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  2. Hi Te Aranui and Mathew
    I really liked the narrative you wrote about Jake camping out and having yummy marshmallows. What a scary story!, but Jake was very clever to give his pillow to the crocodile.

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