Learning Journey

Tuesday, 26 May 2015

My First Narrative

Jaguar Invasion!
Once there were two people named Jake and Jayson. They were on a container ship until they accidentally got hit by a flying jet plane missile. It was shot so hard that the container ship sunk with the 500,000 people except for Jake and Jayson. Because they were best friends Jake helped Jayson onto a piece of shining metal and they both paddled to a faraway island with a humongous volcano.
Right in the center of the small island lived jaguars that could blend into the leaves and bushes, even the volcano. When Jake and Jayson got to the island a jaguar was already waiting for them. Luckily someone was there to help them fend the jaguars. Jake shot one with his gun and they took it home for dinner.  They enjoyed their dinner and lived happily on the island.

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