Marshmallow

Marshmallows

One night there was a boy named Jake camping in the woods. He was roasting his marshmallows over the fire when he he heard something behind him. When he turned around he saw a crocodile. He was very quiet so the small boy gave the crocodile a marshmallow. He only had three marshmallows left. As the boy gave him the last marshmallow he snatched it from his hand.  When he ran out of marshmallows the crocodile got really mad. He started  chasing  the small boy around camp site. Then the boy had an idea. He found his pillow that looked like a marshmallow and gave it to the crocodile. The crocodile was so happy. Then the boy ran away screaming, help!!!!!!!

When the crocodile went to roast his marshmallow it popped. He got really sad. He  sat and looked  at  the  moon. They both lived happily ever after.

by  TeAranui and Mathew

My First Narrative

Jaguar Invasion!

Once there were two people named Jake and Jayson. They were on a container ship until they accidentally got hit by a flying jet plane missile. It was shot so hard that the container ship sunk with the 500,000 people except for Jake and Jayson. Because they were best friends Jake helped Jayson onto a piece of shining metal and they both paddled to a faraway island with a humongous volcano.

Right in the center of the small island lived jaguars that could blend into the leaves and bushes, even the volcano. When Jake and Jayson got to the island a jaguar was already waiting for them. Luckily someone was there to help them fend the jaguars. Jake shot one with his gun and they took it home for dinner.  They enjoyed their dinner and lived happily on the island.